…continuing…
205 INT/EXT VARIOUS. MONTAGE.
DAY/NIGHT
-
HONEY sits in class in her school uniform, listening attentively.
JASPER (voice over)
That
was the beginning of the 'honeymoon'…
The
TEACHER asks a question. HONEY'S arm shoots up.
JASPER (voice over)
That's
what Rebecca called it…
-
HONEY teaches HELEN to cast a rod from the rocks HELEN, all thumbs, laughs at
her lack of fishing skills.
JASPER
(voice over)
She
said it wouldn't last…
JASPER
and DANIEL, fishing nearby, look on and laugh.
JASPER (voice over)
…but
I didn't believe her. Nor did mum and dad.
-
REBECCA, in her office talking with DANIEL and HELEN, shrugs, shakes her head,
holds up her hands: “Beat's me!”
JASPER (voice over)
Rebecca
couldn't find any trace of Honey's family…
HONEY,
JASPER, DANIEL and HELEN sit at the table in the dining room.
JASPER (voice over)
…and
Honey was not going to help with any clues.
HONEY
laughs, shakes her head, as HELEN, jug of crepe mix in hand, prepares to pour
it into the flambé pan.
JASPER (voice over)
I
figured…we figured…it was because she didn't want to go home.
HONEY
picks a packet of long stem matches up from the table.
JASPER (voice over)
And
I didn't want her to go home.
HELEN
picks up a bottle of Crème de Menthe.
JASPER (voice over)
I
liked having a sister - even if she was a bit weird sometimes.
HONEY
watches HELEN'S movements with a 'strange' intensity.
JASPER (voice over)
But
as long as she took her medication…
HONEY
takes a long-stemmed match from the box.
DANIEL
Have
you taken your pills?
HONEY
Yes
dad!
HELEN
laughs, splashes a liquor into the flambé dish. HONEY strikes a match, hands it
to HELEN, who lights the liquor in the pan.
HONEY
is mesmerized by the flames.
-
JASPER and HONEY in bed together.
JASPER (voice over)
Honey
taught me to think about things in a different way.
HONEY
Happiness
is just a station along the way, ay!
JASPER
On
the way where?
HONEY
To
your destination.
JASPER
And
what's the destination?
HONEY
To
sing with the angels.
JASPER
thinks about this for a long moment.
JASPER
So
its OK to be unhappy?
HONEY
Not
okay, Jas. Just the way it is. A station along the way.
JASPER
listens, wide-eyed, snuggles closer to HONEY
HONEY
One
of heaps of stations and you've got to stop at them all.
HELEN
appears in the doorway, taps her watch.
HELEN
School
night!
HONEY
kisses JASPER on the cheek, leaps out of bed, kisses HELEN quickly on the cheek
as she walks out the door.
206 INT. KITCHEN AREA. DANIEL'S
STUDIO. DAY
HONEY,
in her school uniform, an iPod at her hip, fills an electric jug with water,
turns it on. As she waits for it to boil she takes a vial of pills from the
backpack at her feet, unscrews the cap, tips two into her hand, looks at
them.
207 INT. TOILET. DAY
HONEY
tosses the pills in her hand into the toilet; upends the rest of the vial into
the toilet; flushes it.
208 INT. DANIEL'S STUDIO. DAY
Amidst
the hustle and bustle of his busy studio (a photo shoot is in progress)
DANIEL
sits at his computer, using Photoshop to enhance the smile of a young woman in
an ad.
HONEY
appears, in her school uniform, a cup of coffee in one hand, her iPod clipped
to her waist. She puts the coffee down on the desk beside DANIEL.
DANIEL
Thanks.
HONEY
leans close to DANIEL, looks at the computer screen, adopts her own version of
an Ad Executive's voice:
HONEY
“Think you could make her 28% happier,
Daniel?”
DANIEL (smiles)
I'm
trying for 42%.
HONEY
laughs, walks to the stairs leading to the 'loft'; puts tiny headphones in her
ears; turns on her iPod. As she climbs the steps her favourite music displaces
all studio sounds.
209 INT. DANIEL'S 'LOFT'. DAY
As
she (and we) listen to her favourite music, HONEY takes her blue one-armed
teddy bear from her backpack and sets it alongside Daniel's teddy bear, facing
each other.
HONEY (voice over)
My
only fear, diving deep into his soul, is the fear that I'll drown.
HONEY
takes out her journal, lies on her tummy on the futon, writing in it. The
camera moves in to a tight shot of her face. She yawns.
HONEY
(voice over)
I
want him to dive deep into my soul too but what if he finds, deep down, the
demons lurking there…
CLOSE
ON DANIEL, at the head of the wooden stairs, looks at HONEY asleep on the futon
- her journal at her side.
HONEY (voice over)
…that
frighten him as much as they frighten me…
A
LITTLE LATER
DANIEL
sits on the edge of the futon, alongside HONEY. Honey's journal is open in his
lap.
HONEY (voice over)
…the
me that even I can't learn to love?
CLOSE
ON Honey's hand-writing:
…the me
that even I can't learn to love?
HONEY
opens her eyes, reaches out, closes her journal.
HONEY
It's
private now.
DANIEL
You've
given away enough secrets?
HONEY
nods.
DANIEL
Do
you really want no-one to find out your secrets?
HONEY
stares at DANIEL - her face giving nothing away.
210 EXT. ROCKS. LATE AFTERNOON
HONEY'S
hands shake as she tries to bait a hook. She is pale, sweats profusely, glances
at her shoulder - a 'crazy' look in her eyes. A TEENAGE BOY fishes from the rocks
nearby. She gives up trying to bait her hook, stares into space, looks at her
shoulder, flicks at her unseen tormentor obsessively.
Her
attention is caught by the TEENAGE BOY reeling something in. HONEY watches as
an octopus emerges from the water, on the end of the boy's line. Her eyes
flare, she watches, mesmerized, as the TEENAGE BOY takes out his knife and
prepares to kill the octopus.
HONEY (screams)
No!
211 EXT. DANIEL AND HELEN'S
HOUSE. DUSK
As
DANIEL pulls up in driveway on his motor bike he catches a glimpse of HONEY,
carrying a bucket, disappearing in through the front door. There is a taxi
parked in the street.
212 INT. KITCHEN. DUSK
HONEY,
carrying a bucket, walks fast past HELEN as she bastes a leg of roasting lamb
in the open oven. JASPER, doing homework on the kitchen table, looks up.
HELEN
Honey!
HONEY
does not reply; moves fast into the Dining Room. JASPER stands, follows her.
DANIEL
walks into the kitchen, looks at HELEN for an explanation. “Beats me!” she
gestures. The sound of JASPER screaming can be heard from the dining room.
213 INT. DINING ROOM. DUSK
HONEY
stands in front of the aquarium - mesmerized by the sight of the octopus
squirming wildly in the aquarium. DANIEL and HELEN rush in. The scene moves
very fast.
DANIEL
What
the…!
HONEY
He
was going to kill it…
HELEN
Honey,
what have you…
DANIEL
It's
going to die in there, Honey. It's a salt water animal. That's fresh water.
HONEY
runs into the kitchen; reappears with a large canister of salt. As she tries to
pour the salt into the aquarium HELEN grabs hold of her arm to stop her. To
brace herself HONEY grabs hold of the edge of the aquarium. DANIEL grabs HONEY
around the waist to pull her away. HONEY hangs onto the edge of the aquarium
and it falls with a crash to the floor. Fish, water, octopus and broken glass
fly everywhere.
A
TAXI DRIVER appears in the doorway.
TAXI DRIVER
Your
daughter. She not pay fare…
214 EXT. ROCKS. NIGHT
JASPER
watches DANIEL tip the octopus from a bucket into the sea. The octopus remains
still for a long moment, as if dead, then swims off. JASPER is relieved.
215 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HONEY,
backpack in hand, stands in the doorway, looks at:
HELEN
drying her photo albums with paper towels. Plastic bags filled with water and
tropical fish rest on the floor.
HONEY
I'm
sorry.
HELEN,
focused totally on her damaged albums, ignores HONEY.
HONEY
Thanks
for trying.
HONEY
hesitates. HELEN won't look at her. HONEY turns, walks out the door. HELEN
looks up, covers her face with her hands.
216 EXT. BEACH. NIGHT
DANIEL
and JASPER walk back towards the car.
DANIEL
Jas,
this is not a time for secrets.
JASPER
I
promised.
DANIEL
Sometimes
you have to break promises.
JASPER
The
way octopusses can wrap themselves around a rock, change their shape, their
colour and…
DANIEL
And?
JASPER
…hide
themselves in a cloud of ink. And…
DANIEL
And?
(A BEAT) Jas?
JASPER
Honey's
mother is alive and Honey loves her more than anything and she wants to take care
of her because she's…she's mentally ill but she won't let Honey take care of
her because…
DANIEL'S
mobile phone rings.
DANIEL
Alive!
Honey's mother is alive?
JASPER
nods, starts to cry. As DANIEL pulls her close, hugging her, he flips open his mobile,
looks at the screen: HELEN. He puts the phone to his ear, listens a moment,
nods.
217 EXT. CITY STREET. NIGHT
HONEY,
a strange look in her eyes, speaks on her mobile.
HONEY
I've
got nowhere to stay.
218 INT. JUVENILE DETENTION
CENTRE. NIGHT
A
YOUTH WORKER, telephone receiver in hand, shakes her head:
YOUTH WORKER (laughs)
Honey,
this is not a holiday camp.
219 EXT. CITY STREET. NIGHT
HONEY
flips her mobile shut, looks at her shoulder. Her POV:
A
Green Goblin on her shoulder laughs, leans close to whisper in her ear.
HONEY
tries to flick the (now invisible) Green Goblin from her shoulder. There is
madness in her eyes now.
JASPER (voice over)
“Where
angels sing and fish can fly…”
220 INT. GRANNY FLAT. NIGHT
JASPER
sits on Honey's bed, reading a note. HELEN stands in the doorway.
JASPER
…and
magic violins do cry…
JASPER
Of
love and longing, I can but try…
CLOSE
ON the note in JASPER'S hands:
WHERE
ANGELS SING AND FISH CAN FLY
AND
MAGIC VIOLINS DO CRY
OF LOVE
AND LONGING, I CAN BUT TRY
TO FIND
THIS PLACE BEFORE I DIE
JASPER
…To
find this place before I die…
HELEN
She's
just trying to get attention.
JASPER
turns and stares at HELEN coldly.
221 EXT. SHOP. NIGHT
HONEY
heaves a brick through a shop window. The burglar alarm goes off. HONEY sits in
the gutter, lights up a cigarette.
A
LITTLE LATER
A
police car approaches. HONEY smiles, stands. The police drive by. HONEY, pissed off, flips open her
mobile phone.
222 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
DANIEL
collects broken glass from the carpet around the plastic bags full of tropical
fish. HELEN walks in, a magazine in her hands.
HELEN
This'll
make your day!
DANIEL
looks at the magazine. CLOSE ON:
The
front cover of the magazine ART NOW. The photo of Honey being arrested with the
text ART OR EXPLOITATION?
DANIEL
is stunned. HELEN sits on the white leather couch, picks up one of her damaged
photo albums, shakes her head.
HELEN
Ruined!
DANIEL
It
can be fixed!
HELEN (angry)
What!
My albums? The aquarium? Your reputation? Our marriage?
223 INT. CAR NIGHT
HONEY,
eyes blazing, sits in the back seat, brushing the unseen Green Goblin from her
shoulder. SIMMO drives.
Alongside
him is COURTNEY, 16. HONEY takes a used envelope from her back pack.
224 INT. JASPER'S ROOM. NIGHT
JASPER
sits on her bed in tears - her hands over her ears. When she removes her hands
she hears her parents arguing.
HELEN (voice off)
This
is not what I wanted.
DANIEL (voice off)
What
did you want?
225 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
shakes her head (“I don't know”), places a water damaged photo album back on
the table alongside the others.
HELEN
What
did you want?
DANIEL
You,
just you.
HELEN
(nods)
Do
you still have me?
DANIEL
I
don't know! Do I?
HELEN
stares at him for a long moment, makes an 'I don't know' gesture, brings her
hands to her face, covers it.
226 EXT. CAR. NIGHT
Through
the window we see HONEY placing a furled umbrella under SIMMO'S shirt, poking
outwards.
SIMMO
What
do I say? 'Stick 'em up?'
HONEY
shakes her head, hands SIMMO a pen and the envelope.
227 INT. CAR. NIGHT
HONEY
watches SIMMO walk into the all-night chemist across the road, glances at her
shoulder fearfully.
228 INT. CHEMIST. NIGHT
SIMMO
hands the envelope to the CHEMIST. He looks at it, looks at SIMMO, at the
umbrella under his shirt sticking out; at the note which reads:
This is
a robery. We want cash and Valium.
CHEMIST
There's
two bs in robbery.
SIMMO (nods)
Thanks.
SIMMO
pauses a moment before walking awkwardly out the door.
229 INT. EN SUITE
BATHROOM/BEDROOM. NIGHT
DANIEL
throws toiletries into his duffle bag. HELEN is angry.
HELEN
Look
at me, fuck you!
DANIEL
turns, faces her; makes a quizzical “And?” gesture. HELEN shakes her head,
makes an “I give up” gesture.
DANIEL
What
the fuck am I supposed to see?
HELEN
You're
fucking blind, Daniel.
DANIEL
But
not psychic! Sorry darling.
HELEN
slaps DANIEL hard across the face.
HELEN
Fuck
off.
DANIEL
Request
granted.
DANIEL
tries to push past HELEN. She blocks his way, takes his head in her hands,
forces him to look at her.
HELEN
Why
do we do this?
DANIEL
looks away. HELEN pulls his head around again, kisses him, lightly at first,
then passionately - her eyes open. DANIEL has his eyes closed. The kiss comes
to an abrupt end.
HELEN
Why
don't you look at me when we kiss? (A BEAT) When we make love?
DANIEL
does not want to have this conversation. He walks past HELEN, throws clothes
into his duffle bag.
HELEN
goes to the walk-in cupboard, takes out the plastic bag with his climbing shoes
and bag of chalk in it, extracts both, hands them to him, speaks calmly.
HELEN
If
you're going to run away you'll need these.
230 INT. JASPER'S ROOM. NIGHT
JASPER
looks out the window at DANIEL, in the street, kick-starting his Harley and
driving off.
HELEN (voice off)
I'm
sorry…
JASPER
turns, looks at HELEN standing in the doorway.
HELEN
…you
had to hear that.
JASPER
stares at HELEN angrily. HELEN sits on the edge of Jasper's bed, pats it: “Come
here?” JASPER shakes her head.
HELEN
Honey's
a survivor. She'll be okay.
JASPER
Being
okay's not enough.
HELEN
nods in agreement. Tears well in her eyes. JASPER walks up to her, puts her
arms around HELEN - her mother's head against her chest; strokes HELEN'S hair.
231 EXT. CITY STREETS/DINING
ROOM/JASPER'S ROOM. NIGHT
In
a MONTAGE, with violin concerto music over:
-
DANIEL searches for Honey on his Harley.
-
HELEN repairs her damaged photo albums in the dining room.
-
JASPER in her bedroom, eyes closed, prays for Honey.
-
DANIEL makes his way to the rocks overlooking the ocean.
-
HELEN picks up her mobile phone; talks to someone.
-
HONEY buys a small petrol can in a service station, walks to a bowser, unscrews
the cap.
232 INT/EXT. FRONT DOOR. NIGHT
HELEN
opens the door to JASMIN. In her arms (head on shoulder) a sleeping girl about
three years old.
HELEN
Shit!
I'd forgotten that you had kids…
233 EXT. PARK. NIGHT
HONEY
sits in a park; the can of petrol between her legs. She unscrews the lid, takes
matches from her pocket.
234 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
JASMIN
lays ABIGAIL on the sofa to sleep.
HELEN
Sorry
to do this to you…
JASMIN
It's
okay. Donald's with his dad and Abbie is used to…this is her 'normal'.
235 EXT. PARK. NIGHT
HONEY
lifts the can of petrol to head level; stares at it.
236 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN,
glass of wine in hand, sits with JASMIN on a white leather couch. ABIGAIL is
asleep on another couch.
HELEN
Lost.
(A BEAT) In a word. (A BEAT) And with not a map in sight.
237 EXT. PARK. NIGHT
HONEY
sits with the can poised above her head, readying to pour petrol on herself.
Her mobile rings. She looks at it for a long moment, puts down the petrol can,
picks up her mobile.
HONEY
Hello…Daniel…Sorry
I fucked your life up…I…
DANIEL (telephone)
Honey,
listen to me…
HONEY
Okay.
DANIEL (telephone)
Yes,
I have thought of stepping into space and going to live with the angels in
eternity…if I was alone in the world…but I could never break the hearts of the
angels I would leave behind. Please don't break my heart, Jasper's heart. (A
BEAT) Helen's heart. You are not alone, Honey.
HONEY
Do
you think you could ever love me as much as you love Jasper?
238 INT. DANIEL'S STUDIO. NIGHT
DANIEL,
mobile at his ear, can't answer this question.
HONEY (telephone)
I'll
be OK. (A BEAT) Don't worry about me. (A BEAT) Promise.
DANIEL
Promise.
239 EXT. PARK. NIGHT
HONEY
flips the mobile phone shut, stares at the box of matches in her hand.
240 INT. STUDIO. NIGHT
DANIEL
sits at a table, staring at his climbing shoes and bag of chalk, fingers
rapping nervously on the table surface.
241 DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
and JASMIN sit together. HELEN, a little tipsy, refills her glass with Brandy
as JASMIN puffs on a joint.
HELEN
I
don't know what I want! (A BEAT) I'm not even sure what I don't want.
JASMIN
laughs, holds the joint out to HELEN.
HELEN
Will
it make me go crazy?
242 EXT. PARK. NIGHT
HONEY
lights a match, stares at it.
243 INT. SHED. YOUNG HONEY'S
HOME. NIGHT
CAROL,
a lit match in her hand, looks up at:
YOUNG
HONEY screaming on the other side of the upstairs window, looking down at her
mother.
244 INT. DANIEL'S STUDIO. NIGHT
DANIEL
stares at his climbing shoes, bag of chalk. His fingers rap nervously on the
table as he smokes a cigarette.
245 DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN,
a little stoned now, photo album in her lap, surveys the half dozen photo
albums laid out on the couch and table.
HELEN
Do
you think I'm a bit obsessive?
JASMIN
smiles, raises her eyebrows.
HELEN
You
don't have to answer… truthfully.
JASMIN
Does
my bum look big in this?
HELEN
bursts out laughing.
246 INT. DANIEL'S STUDIO. NIGHT
DANIEL
takes a last puff on his cigarette, stubs it out, takes another cigarette from
the packet, puts it in his mouth, lights a match. He looks at the burning match
as the flame makes its way closer and closer to his fingers. He blows the match
out, crumples the unlit cigarette, picks up his climbing shoes and bag of chalk
and walks to the door.
247 EXT. OLD FACTORY. NIGHT
DANIEL
walks from the front door to a garbage bin, opens the lid, throws his climbing
shoes and bag of chalk into it.
248 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
is more than a little stoned and drunk now.
HELEN
The
only thing I'm sure of is that I don't want to never know what I want!
JASMIN
smiles.
HELEN
At
least I think I'm reasonably sure!
JASMIN
laughs.
249 INT. STUDIO. NIGHT
DANIEL
picks up his mobile, punches in a number: HELEN. He sees something moving
through the window, cancels his call, walks to the window, sees HONEY standing
in the parking lot, arms bleeding, staring blankly at him.
250 EXT. OLD FACTORY. NIGHT
DANIEL
walks up to HONEY, takes her hand, leads her to the entrance.
251 INT. DANIEL'S STUDIO. NIGHT
HONEY
glares fearfully at her shoulder, madness in her eyes as DANIEL bandages her
arms.
DANIEL
There
is no Green Goblin, Honey.
HONEY
I
know, but I can see him. Hear him. I know he's not real (A BEAT) But what's
real?
DANIEL
Me.
Here. Now.
HONEY
stares at DANIEL with unseeing eyes.
DANIEL
Right?
HONEY
is not sure. She looks at her hand.
HONEY
Is
this my hand? I know it is my hand but…it's not my hand.
252 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
and JASMIN, stoned, sit on the white 'leather' couch - trying to look into each
other's eyes without laughing. JASMIN moves her head close to HELEN'S as if to
kiss her.
JASMIN
What
do you see?
HELEN
Your
lips, your nose, your eyes.
JASMIN
moves closer, her lips now an inch from HELEN'S.
JASMIN
And
now?
HELEN
Just
your eyes.
253 INT. DANIEL'S 'LOFT'. NIGHT
HONEY,
fully dressed, lies on the futon looking at DANIEL, sitting beside her,
covering her with a sheet.
HONEY
Ted?
DANIEL
hands HONEY her blue teddy bear. HONEY holds it close.
DANIEL
You
going to be OK?
HONEY
nods, reaches out with her hand, takes DANIEL'S, holds it tight, looks directly
into his eyes.
DANIEL
I'm
just downstairs, OK?
HONEY
shakes her head, doesn't want him to leave her. DANIEL tries to disengage his
hand from HONEY'S. She resists. DANIEL strokes her hair gently, disengages his
hand, stands.
254 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
and JASMIN look into each other's eyes.
JASMIN
What
do you see?
HELEN
is scared, excited and confused at the same time.
JASMIN
I
don't want a stranger peering into my soul. He can put his cock inside me but I
don't him to catch even a glimpse of my soul.
HELEN
nods - her face just inches JASMIN'S still.
HELEN
And
you don't really want to be looking into the soul of a perfect stranger!?
JASMIN
shakes her head almost imperceptibly. HELEN and JASMIN look into each others
eyes for a long moment.
JASMIN
Or
looking into the soul of someone you love…and finding a stranger.
255 INT. 'LOFT'. DANIEL'S STUDIO.
NIGHT
HONEY
looks at her shoulder - the fear in her eyes dissipating as she nods her
agreement with whatever the (unseen) Goblin on her shoulder is saying to her.
256 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
pours Crème de Menthe into two small goblets as JASMIN rolls another joint.
JASMIN
No
tall, dark stranger sweeping you…(off your feet)?
HELEN (smiles)
Only
in my dreams.
JASMIN
Is
that enough?
HELEN (laughs)
How
much is enough? How much is too much? Fucked if I know, Jasmin.
JASMIN
And
Daniel?
HELEN
A
young model once. Only once… that I know of…I think(A BEAT) just once…
257 INT. STUDIO. NIGHT
DANIEL
lies in the dark on a fold out couch bed - eyes wide open, unable to sleep.
HONEY (voice off)
Daniel.
DANIEL
turns his head, sees HONEY standing at the bottom of the stairs to the 'loft',
clutching Ted - her blue teddy.
HONEY
I'm
scared.
DANIEL
watches HONEY as she walks up to his bed, sits on it.
DANIEL
The
Green Goblin?
HONEY
looks at her shoulder, nods.
HONEY
Can't
shut him up. A real chatterbox.
DANIEL
Is
he talking to you now?
HONEY
No,
because you're here. (a beat) And jealous, I think.
DANIEL (smiles)
What's
he talk about?
HONEY
How
its all my fault.
DANIEL
What?
(A BEAT) What's your fault?
HONEY
shrugs, is reluctant to talk about it.
DANIEL
Maybe
this is one secret you should tell someone.
HONEY
What
happened to my mother. How if it hadn't been for me…
DANIEL
If
it hadn't been for you, what?
HONEY
If
it hadn't been for me she'd be dead and…singing with the angels.
DANIEL
I
don't understand.
HONEY
looks at DANIEL. Tears stream down her face. She looks at her shoulder.
DANIEL
leans close to HONEY'S shoulder.
DANIEL
Fuck
off.
HONEY
bursts out laughing, looks at her shoulder.
DANIEL
Did
he fuck off?
HONEY
No,
but you should see his face. He's pissed!
HONEY
leans close into her shoulder.
HONEY
I
would really appreciate it Mr. Chatterbox if you just kept your thoughts to
yourself, okay?
HONEY
turns to DANIEL, smiles, becomes vulnerable.
HONEY
Do
you think you could ever love me the way you love Jasper?
DANIEL
I
don't know. Maybe.
HONEY (smiles)
Maybe
is enough.
258 EXT. FRONT DOOR.NIGHT
JASMIN
holds ABIGAIL in her arms - her sleeping head nestled into JASMIN'S shoulder.
HELEN kisses JASMIN on the cheek.
HELEN
Thanks.
259 INT. STUDIO. NIGHT
HONEY
sits on the edge of DANIEL'S bed, lighting a cigarette.
HONEY
My
mum never kissed me or cuddled me or hugged me. (A BEAT) Only time she ever
touched me was when she hit me. (A BEAT) Sometimes I'd deliberately get her
angry so she'd hit me…
DANIEL (nods)
I
guess feeling pain is better than feeling nothing.
HONEY
Is
that why you burnt your fingers?
DANIEL (laughs)
Ever
though of becoming a therapist when you grow up?
HONEY (laughs)
You
could be my first patient.
DANIEL
smiles. HONEY holds her cigarette out to him. He shakes his head.
HONEY
You're
good at resisting temptation?
DANIEL
nods. HONEY looks at him for a long moment then lies beside DANIEL, propped up
on one elbow.
DANIEL
Honey!
HONEY
Did
Rebecca tell you I'd probably try to seduce you?
DANIEL
What
she said was 'Girls like Honey who have been sexually abused…'
HONEY
I'm
not a girl like Honey. I'm just Honey!
DANIEL
Maybe
I do need a puff…
He
reaches for her cigarette. HONEY shakes her head. DANIEL smiles. HONEY smiles,
puts her head on his chest.
HONEY
Tell
me a story.
DANIEL (smiles)
'Honey
and the Octopus'.
HONEY
frowns playfully.
HONEY
I'm
no sure I want to hear this story!
DANIEL
I
read something in your journal… something like…“I want to dive in deep but I'm
afraid I'll drown…”?
HONEY
nods.
260 INT. DANIEL AND HELEN'S
BEDROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
sits on the bed, her old violin resting on her lap, reading through some sheet
music, humming to herself.
261 INT. STUDIO. NIGHT
HONEY
lies alongside DANIEL, reading from her journal.
HONEY
“I
want him to dive into my soul too but what if he finds, deep down, monsters he
doesn't like. Monsters he can't learn to love, the me that I can't even learn
to love?”
DANIEL
Your
monsters don't scare me.
HONEY (laughs)
You
are so funny! (A BEAT) You didn't read the next sentence, did you? (READING) “She went on to say, 'I'm afraid of
what I'll see if I look too deeply into my own eyes. I'm not sure I want anyone
else to see what's there. Who's there. Maybe there's no-one there. Or maybe
no-one I'd want to meet on a dark night.”
DANIEL
She?
Who said that? (A BEAT) Helen?
HONEY
nods.
262 INT. KITCHEN. DAY
JASPER,
in her pajamas, eats breakfast. A 'beep' on her mobile: a text message. She
looks at the screen: HONEY:
luv u
JASPER
smiles, starts to write a reply as HELEN, on the other side of the kitchen,
punches a number into her mobile: DANIEL
263 INT. DANIEL'S STUDIO. DAY
In
the foreground Daniel's mobile, vibrates by his computer. In the background,
DANIEL is asleep on the fold-out bed.
HONEY,
fully dressed, sits on the edge of the bed reading a text message on her
mobile, smiles. She walks to pick up the vibrating mobile, sees on the table
the magazine:
ART NOW
with the photo of herself being arrested and the text ART OR EXPLOITATION?
The
smile disappears from her face.
A
LITTLE LATER
HONEY
emerges from the bathroom - dressed, drying her hair. DANIEL has his hands filled
with the sheets from his bed and Honey's blue teddy bear. HONEY - nervous,
tentative - picks up the ART NOW magazine.
HONEY
Does
this come out in Western Australia?
DANIEL (nods)
Yes,
but don't worry about it. It's…
HONEY
I
need to tell you something. About me. (A BEAT) Maybe you should sit down!
DANIEL (grins)
You're
actually a boy?
HONEY
smiles, shakes her head, is about to continue when the door opens. HELEN stands
there in the doorway - mouth open. She takes in scenario:
DANIEL
with teddy bear, HONEY drying her hair - walks back out the door, slamming it
behind her.
264 INT. FACTORY FOYER. DAY
HELEN
runs through the foyer. DANIEL chases her.
DANIEL
Helen,
please…
JASPER
runs from the front door towards HELEN.
JASPER
The
police!
HELEN
stops. DANIEL slows. At the front entrance they see:
TWO
POLICEMEN and one POLICEWOMAN standing in the doorway.
HONEY
runs up behind DANIEL, sees the police; stops. HELEN, DANIEL and JASPER all
turn to look at HONEY - asking, with their eyes, “What's going on?”
HONEY
Last
night, I was with…
The
POLICE start to walk towards them
HELEN (sotto voce)
Honey,
you don't have to say anything. Nothing. OK?
265 INT. POLICE STATION. DAY
DANIEL
signs bail forms and counts money out on the counter. REBECCA stands by HONEY
closeby. HELEN, lips pursed, arms crossed, on the other side of the room, is
furious.
266 EXT. POLICE STATION. DAY
As
HONEY, DANIEL, HELEN and REBECCA walk from the police station:
REBECCA
You
know what 'armed robbery' would get you if you were an adult? Ten years! There
would be no bail!
JASPER,
standing by the family SUV, looks on from a distance as REBECCA berates HONEY.
267 INT. CAR. DAY
HELEN
drives - DANIEL in the driver's seat, HONEY is in the back seat, alongside
JASPER.
HELEN
I
want the truth. No bullshit.
HONEY
nods. JASPER takes HONEY'S hand, holds it tight.
HELEN
Did
you fuck Daniel?
HONEY
shakes her head. HELEN looks at DANIEL for confirmation. DANIEL shakes his
head. JASPER'S eyes dart hither and thither as she registers the complicated
interpersonal dynamics.
HONEY
Daniel's
like my dad.
HELEN
Jesus,
Honey! He's not your fucking dad.
268 INT. CAR/EXT. DANIEL AND
HELEN'S HOUSE. DAY
As
they pull up outside Daniel and Helen's house, HONEY sees the 4WD with Channel
6 written on the side pulling up across the road. She speaks fast - to DANIEL.
HONEY
You
know you said one there was nothing I could say that would shock you.
HONEY
casts a quick look at JASPER. Both DANIEL and HELEN notice. JASPER turns bright
red. A FILM CREW is out of the car now and making their way towards them.
HONEY
Well
there is something…
HONEY
is cut off by a REPORTER'S shouted question:
REPORTER
Mr.
Pearson, how long have you known Honeysuckle Williams' true identity?
DANIEL
opens the car door, places his hand over the CAMERAMAN'S lens, pushes past him.
DANIEL turns to HONEY - out of the car now, along with HELEN and
JASPER.
DANIEL
What's
he talking about?
HONEY
turns white, looks briefly at JASPER, who turns her head away. HELEN observes
this interchange.
HELEN
Jasper,
do you know…?
HONEY
I
made her promise not to tell.
DANIEL
Not
tell what?
HONEY
My
name's Catherine. And I'm not 16. I'm 20.
269 INT. DINING ROOM. EVENING
DANIEL,
HELEN, HONEY and JASPER watch the TV.
Onscreen:
REPORTER
(voice off)
What
do you think of your husband bailing out a criminal with a record as long as
your arm?
HELEN,
on TV, standing outside their home, looks from DANIEL to HONEY - too shocked to
reply.
DANIEL,
HELEN, HONEY and JASPER watch the TV
with levels of shock appropriate to their character.
NEWS READER
One
of Catherine's friends from Perth was not surprised when she heard that Miss
Jones had been passing herself off as a 16 year old.
A
TEENAGE GIRL appears onscreen.
TEENAGE GIRL
Me
and Katy was in detention together heaps. She's got a record as long as my
*****ing arm. The Queen of Con they called her in juvenile detention. One of
those liars, what do you call them? Path…something.
INTERVIEWER
Pathological
liar?
JASPER
sees something through the window, walks over to it, turns back to the others:
JASPER
The
police…
270 EXT. FRONT DOOR. DAY
DANIEL
appears in the doorway. The same TWO POLICEMEN and POLICEWOMAN as before are
standing there. Behind them, in the street, is a small contingent of
JOURNALISTS, CAMERAMEN, etc.
POLICEMAN
Sorry,
mate, but we've got a new warrant…in her proper name. (A BEAT) And age.
DANIEL
nods, looks back to HELEN, arms folded, shaking her head in a mixture of shock
and disapproval. JASPER moves to HONEY and hugs her. HONEY turns to HELEN -
contrite.
HONEY
I'm
sorry Helen.
HELEN
nods but won't look at HONEY. HONEY walks to the door. The POLICEWOMAN moves to
take HONEY'S arm. DANIEL gestures to her that it is not necessary. He takes
HONEY'S hand.
JASPER,
at the front door watches DANIEL and HONEY walk
towards the waiting media, ignoring the questions shouted at them.
271 INT. HOSPITAL WARD. DAY
A
young girl's hand takes wilting red roses from a vase.
JASPER,
wilted flowers in her hand, looks at GRANT, dozing in the bed beside her; tubes
in his nose; his body connected to various life-support devises.
DANIEL,
alongside HONEY, hands a new bunch of red roses to JASPER. As she places them
in the vase, GRANT opens his eyes.
GRANT
Hello
Jasper.
JASPER
Hi.
JASPER
leans over, kisses him on the cheek.
GRANT
Beautiful
as ever.
GRANT
looks at the roses, smiles, looks at DANIEL, then HONEY. JASMIN appears in the
doorway, flowers in hand.
GRANT
Daniel…Honey…
GRANT
looks at HONEY for along moment, holds out his hand, beckons her.
JASMIN
watches as HONEY walks up, takes GRANT’S hand. JASPER sees JASMIN, beams her a
huge smile.
GRANT
Daniel's
told me about you and your angels. (A BEAT) Don't be in too much of a hurry to
meet them.
CLOSE
ON HONEY.
GRANT
(voice over)
The
angels will wait. They've got all the time in the world.
272
INT. YOUNG HONEY'S BEDROOM
CLOSE
ON YOUNG HONEY looking out the window at:
CAROL,
a can of petrol in her hands, splashes it around the shed.
YOUNG
HONEY looks on from the window, puzzled, as CAROL:
…sits
in the middle of the shed, visible through the window, picks up the can of
petrol, pours the remainder of it over her head, sits for a moment, takes out a
packet of matches.
YOUNG
HONEY, aware now that her mother is about to set herself alight, screams.
YOUNG HONEY
No!
CAROL,
a lit match in her fingers, looks up towards YOUNG HONEY. There is madness in
her eyes.
HONEY
turns, runs from the room.
273
INT. STAIRS. NIGHT
YOUNG
HONEY runs downstairs.
274 EXT. YARD. NIGHT
YOUNG
HONEY runs across the yard towards the shed - CAROL visible through a window
staring at the lit match, mesmerized.
YOUNG HONEY
No,
mummy.
275 INT. SHED. NIGHT
CAROL
looks up from the burning match to where YOUNG HONEY stands in the doorway,
staring at her as though she does not recognize her. She looks back at the lit
match in her hands, moves it slowly towards her body.
YOUNG
HONEY throws herself at her CAROL’S arm, knocking the lit match from her hand.
Almost immediately petrol soaked furniture catches light and quick as a flash
the fire spreads. YOUNG HONEY grabs hold of CAROL, drags her to the door and
outside. CAROL screams.
CAROL
No,
No, no…I want to go and live with the angels.
CAROL
wrestles with YOUNG HONEY - trying to free herself, run back into the fire.
YOUNG HONEY grabs hold of two fist fulls of her mother's hair and won't let go.
CAROL'S screaming carries over to:
276 INT. GRANNY FLAT. NIGHT
HONEY,
her face pale, sweating profusely, lies with her head in HELEN'S lap, crying.
HELEN strokes her hair, fights back the tears in her own eyes.
HONEY
She's
never forgiven me.
HELEN
You
saved her life. That was the right thing to do.
HONEY
But
she wanted to go and be with the angels.
HELEN
But
she's…
HONEY
Mad…Madder
than me. Much. I just want to look after her, but...she won't let me.
HELEN
Maybe
she doesn't want to fuck your life up. Be a burden.
HONEY
That's
a beautiful lie, Helen but…lies have caused me nothing but trouble and they
reckon the truth sets you free, ay?
HELEN
I'm
not sure it does, Honey.
HONEY
Then
what does?
HELEN
shakes her head.
HELEN
Fucked
if I know. Love maybe…
HONEY (smiles)
Love
maybe…
HELEN
Where's
your mother now?
HONEY
A
boarding house in Perth. Most of the time. Sometimes, when she forgets her
medication, she winds up in ward 5 for a few days. (A BEAT) That's where she
met John. He's mad too, but he took care of me…
277 EXT. COURT. DAY
HONEY,
DANIEL, HELEN and JASPER walk towards the entrance to the court - outside of which awaits a media
scrum. HELEN leans close to HONEY.
HELEN
(sotto voce)
Lie,
deny, say nothing! Whatever you do, don't tell them the truth, OK? Promise. (A
BEAT) Honey!
278 INT. COURT. DAY
COURTNEY
is in the witness box.
PROSECUTOR
Miss
Simpson, you told the arresting officers…
To
one side of COURTNEY, in the dock, sits HONEY.
PROSECUTOR
…that
Miss Thomas, also known as Honey Williams, was in the car with you that night.
DANIEL,
HELEN, JASPER and REBECCA are in the court room.
COURTNEY
Yes.
PROSECUTOR
But
in your signed statement you claim that she was not with you.
COURTNEY
Yes.
PROSECUTOR
And
you will be aware that Simon Tremblow… Simmo… also insists that Miss Thomas was
not in the car that night.
COURTNEY (nods)
Honey…I
knew Catherine wanted to be locked up and…
PROSECUTOR
You
thought she'd appreciate you… dobbing her in?
LATER
A
YOUTH WORKER is in the witness box.
YOUTH WORKER
I
told her it wasn't a holiday camp.
The
JUDGE sighs, looks at the PROSECUTOR.
JUDGE
Do
you wish to call any more witnesses?
PROSECUTOR
No,
your Honour.
HONEY
What
about me?
JUDGE
Is
there something you'd like to tell the court?
HONEY
looks to DANIEL and HELEN. HELEN shakes her head. HONEY looks at the JUDGE,
nods.
A
LITTLE LATER
HONEY
has her hand resting on a bible.
JUDGE
You
do understand the importance of telling the truth, Miss Thomas?
HONEY
The
truth shall set you free, eh!
The
JUDGE looks over the top of his spectacles at HONEY.
HONEY
So
help me God.
PROSECUTOR
Can
you tell the court anything about the events leading up to and surrounding the
attempted armed robbery of the chemist?
HONEY
Yes,
it was my idea. I got Simmo to write the note. He didn't want to do it. Nor did
Courtney. But I...
JUDGE
Miss
Thomas, one of your 'friends' described you as a 'pathological liar', isn't
that correct?
HONEY
Yes,
but, this time I'm not lying.
JUDGE
Isn't
that what a 'pathological liar' would say if she was hoping to get herself
locked up?
HONEY
Maybe,
but I don't want to be locked up anymore. But I also want to tell the truth
and…
JUDGE
Miss
Thomas, I suggest that it would be in your own best interests, in this
instance, to say no more…
HONEY
But…
279 INT. DANIEL AND HELEN'S HOME.
DINING ROOM. NIGHT
DANIEL,
glass of champagne in hand, proposes a toast.
DANIEL
“The truth shall set you free.”
HELEN,
JASPER, HONEY and JASMIN - seated around the dining table (first course
completed) - laugh, raise their glasses.
EVERYONE
“The
truth shall set you free.”
JASMIN
has Honey's journal open in front of her.
HONEY
When
I lie everyone believes me! When I tell the truth the Judge thinks I'm lying.
HELEN
stands, collects dishes as JASMIN turns a page and bursts out laughing.
CLOSE
ON:
A
caricature of Daniel.
JASMIN
holds it up for all to see. Everyone laughs.
280
INT. KITCHEN. NIGHT
HELEN
places a jug, desert plates, spoons and forks on a tray, glances back into the
Dining Room where she sees:
JASMIN
turning a page of Honey's journal, reacting with shock to what she reads there.
JASMIN looks up, tries to catch DANIEL'S attention with her eyes.
HELEN
freezes, thinks for a moment, composes herself, picks up the tray, walks back
into the Dining Room, places the tray on the table as JASMIN hands the journal
back to HONEY.
281
INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
empties her glass of wine, lights the chafing dish with a long match. Her eyes
are on Honey's journal. With the happiest smile she can muster:
HELEN
Can
I get a copy of the caricature of Daniel?
HELEN
holds out her hand.
HONEY
Of
course!
HONEY
hands her the journal, smiles at DANIEL. HELEN
flips pages, arrives at the caricature, keeps flipping until she finds
the page she is interested in.
JASMIN
turns pale. DANIEL wonders what is going on. Suddenly, the tension at the table
is palpable. HELEN reads, her face hardening into a mask.
HELEN
Anyone
else have any secrets they'd like to share tonight? Daniel? Jasmin?
A
look of horror crosses JASMIN'S face.
HELEN
Lying
is not an option tonight, Jasmin. “The truth shall set you free.”
JASPER
turns to HONEY angrily.
JASPER
You
wrote it in your diary? Duh!
DANIEL
Wrote
what?
HELEN
Jasmin
is just about to tell us, aren't you, Jasmin?
HELEN
glares at DANIEL.
HELEN
Or
maybe you'd would like to share yours and Jasmin's little secret with
us…darling!?
DANIEL
There
is no secret.
HELEN
Fucking
Jasmin's not a secret! Excuse me! Am I the only one who doesn't know it?
DANIEL
We
did not…
HELEN
cuts DANIEL off, turns on JASMIN angrily.
HELEN
I
thought you were my friend!
JASMIN
We
didn't fuck, Helen. We didn't make love. We didn't…
HELEN
Kiss?
Yes? No?
DANIEL
and JASMIN'S silence speaks volumes.
HELEN
Get
the fuck out of my house. Both of you.
JASPER
Mum…!
DANIEL
Yes,
we kissed.
HELEN
With
your eyes open?
DANIEL
and JASMIN exchange glances.
HELEN
Go!
HELEN
throws a plate at DANIEL. It hits the wall, shatters.
JASPER
Mum,
stop it…
HELEN holds her hands up to quieten JASPER. DANIEL
walks up to HELEN in hopes of placating her. She steps back from him.
HELEN
Just
go.
JASPER
Mum,
don't do this…
HELEN
Oh,
it's me doing this, is it Jasper!? If you want to take your father's side,
fine! I don't give a fuck!
JASPER
But…
DANIEL
signals to JASPER to stop. JASPER bursts into tears and runs out the front
door.
HONEY
looks on, distressed, moves to pick up pieces of broken plate.
HELEN
stares into space; seems not to notice JASMIN or HONEY.
A
LITTLE LATER
HELEN
pours herself half a tumbler of Brandy, takes a gulp, looks through the front
door to where HONEY sits on the front step talking on her mobile phone. She
turns to JASMIN.
HELEN
Why
are you still here?
JASMIN
I
want to tell you something.
HELEN
I
don't want to hear it.
JASMIN
I'm
not going to lie to you, promise.
HELEN
I
want you to lie to me! (A BEAT) The truth is too hard…
JASMIN
walks up to HELEN, takes her by the hand, leads her to the white 'leather'
couch.
JASMIN
Daniel
and me…
HELEN
covers her ears. JASMIN uncovers them.
282 INT. DANIEL'S STUDIO. DAY
DANIEL
sits in front of his computer. He has been using photoshop to 'touch up' the
photo of Jasmin, but has turned and now faces JASMIN, sitting beside him. They
are listening to Tim Buckely's 'Sweet Surrender'. This is a flashback.
TIM
BUCKLY (sings)
“Sweet
surrender, surrender. If we could just surrender”
JASMIN
I
wish, I wish, I wish…
DANIEL
What?
JASMIN
That
I could surrender.
DANIEL
Surrender
what?
JASMIN
My
heart, my soul…to the man I love.
DANIEL
Who's
the lucky man?
JASMIN
I'm
still waiting! He's running a bit late. (DANIEL LAUGHS) And you?
DANIEL
She
arrived just in time.
JASMIN
smiles, looks at DANIEL for a long moment.
JASMIN
Have
you? Surrendered?
DANIEL
hesitates for a moment, then shakes his head.
JASMIN
And
Helen?
DANIEL
shakes his head. JASMIN looks at him quizzically.
DANIEL
We're
both a bit scared.
JASMIN
Of?
DANIEL
looks into JASMIN'S eyes for a long moment.
DANIEL
Saying
'yes', I guess. For better, for worse, for richer for poorer... bla, bla bla…
JASMIN
nods, smiles, looks away, becomes shy, vulnerable, looks back at DANIEL.
DANIEL'S
and JASMIN'S kiss starts tentatively but soon becomes passionate. They both
keep their eyes open - each with one eye just millimeters from one eye of the
other.
JASMIN
Helen
is a lucky girl.
DANIEL
Daniel
is a lucky boy.
JASMIN
smiles, nods.
JASMIN
That
never happened.
DANIEL
nods, smiles.
283 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
looks at JASMIN for a long moment, tears in her eyes.
HELEN
Why
is it so difficult to say 'yes'?
JASMIN
shakes her head.
JASMIN
I
wish I knew!
HONEY (voice off)
Because…
HELEN
and JASMIN become aware of HONEY standing behind them.
HONEY
…you
open your heart so wide when you say 'yes'…your heart breaks when all you get
back is… 'no'.
HELEN
Why
does Daniel talk to you about his heart, to both of you…and not to me?
HONEY
Why
do you talk with me about things you don't talk to Daniel about?
HELEN
looks at HONEY in shock - the relevance of what she is saying sinking in
slowly. The sound of a car horn breaks the silence. HONEY picks up her
backpack.
HONEY
moves forward, kisses HELEN on the cheek, hands her a small parcel wrapped in
colourful paper.
HONEY
Just
a little…something…
HELEN,
still in something of a daze, looks at the parcel.
HONEY
Thank
you for everything. See ya Jasmin.
JASMIN
Take
care of yourself, Honey. Don't be a stranger.
HONEY
nods, glances at HELEN briefly, walks out the door.
HELEN
and JASMIN look at each other. HELEN looks at the present in her hands.
Only
now does it register for her that Honey has gone.
She
leaps to her feet, rushes to the front door to see John's blue car driving off
up the street.
284 EXT. STREET OUTSIDE DANIEL
AND HELEN'S HOUSE
A
taxi pulls up. JASMIN opens the door, turns back to HELEN, standing beside her.
JASMIN
You
going to be okay?
HELEN
Is
okay enough?
JASMIN
wraps her arms around HELEN, hugs her.
285 INT. JOHN'S CAR. NIGHT
JOHN
drives. HONEY, in the passenger seat, stares out the front window, tears in her
eyes.
JOHN,
registers HONEY'S distress, takes a vial of pills out of his pocket, tosses
them to HONEY. She catches them, looks at the vial, unscrews the cap.
286 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
looks at Honey's present. She opens it. Inside there is a CD and four
cellophane packets with violin strings in them. HELEN stares at them for a long
moment.
287 INT. STUDIO LOFT. NIGHT
JASPER
sits with her back to the wall on Daniel's futon.
DANIEL,
Jasper's Illustrated Biblical stories in his hands (he has been reading to her)
sits beside her.
JASPER
Mum
really does love you.
DANIEL
I
know.
JASPER
Almost
as much as me.
DANIEL
laughs, takes JASPER in his arms, hugs her tight. JASPER'S face breaks into a
radiant smile.
288 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
The
room is empty. Violin music plays on the CD deck. Moving into the room we see
half a dozen small goblets of different coloured liqueurs. The camera moves to
the water damaged photo albums spread out on the white 'leather' sofa. Resting
on one is an almost empty glass of Brandy.
HONEY
sits on the sofa, picks up a photo album, looks at:
A photo
of YOUNG HELEN, (9), violin tucked between her neck shoulder, smiling happily
for the camera.
HONEY
looks up, sees HELEN walk into the room.
HONEY
Couldn't
leave without having one last crepe, ay!
HELEN
smiles.
HONEY
Perfectly
symmetrical, please.
HELEN laughs.
A
LITTLE LATER
HELEN
drinks a small goblet of red liqueur.
HELEN
Want
a green one or a red one?
HONEY
looks at the small goblets of liqueur.
HONEY
One
of each!
HELEN
smiles, unscrews the top of the kerosene bottle, starts to fill the base of the
chafing dish.
289 INT. DANIEL'S 'LOFT'. NIGHT
DANIEL
and JASPER lie together on the futon - JASPER'S head on DANIEL'S chest. They
both have their eyes open.
DANIEL
You
thinking the same as me?
JASPER
nods.
290 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN,
more than a little drunk, dances around the room playing an imaginary violin in
tune with the up tempo violin music playing on the CD. HONEY dances with her.
HONEY
To
beautiful lies!
HONEY
and HELEN pick up glasses of liqueur, toss them back.
HELEN
To
beautiful crepes! Symmetrical lies.
HELEN
laughs, lights a long match.
291 EXT. OLD FACTORY. NIGHT
DANIEL
kick starts his Harley. JASPER puts on a crash helmet.
292 INT. DINING ROOM NIGHT
HELEN
splashes Brandy straight from the bottle into the flambé pan. Flames leap up.
HONEY looks on, excited.
HELEN
splashes more Brandy into the pan. The flames leap higher. HELEN laughs; HONEY
is mesmerized.
HELEN
sloshes a large amount of Brandy into the flambé dish. There is an explosion of
flames - the fire backing up to the
bottle itself and igniting the fumes in it in a small explosion.
HELEN
drops the bottle. Brandy sprays onto the carpet, the white 'leather' couch,
igniting as it goes.
293 EXT. CITY STREET. NIGHT
DANIEL
drives his motor bike. JASPER clings on the back.
294 INT DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HELEN
looks to her photo albums, arranged on the table by the burning 'leather' couch
- in the early (and not particularly dangerous) stages of a fire.
She
makes her way over to them, piles them on top of each other and turns to rush
from the increasingly smoky room. She bumps into the edge of the table in her
panic and knocks over the bottle of kerosene.
Kerosene
spills from the bottle onto the table and then the floor but does not, at this
stage, come into contact with any flame.
295 INT KITCHEN. NIGHT
HONEY
stands in the smoky kitchen - mobile phone in hand.
HONEY
Daniel,
pick up. Please…
There
is a flash of light in the doorway. The kerosene has ignited.
296 EXT. CITY STREET. NIGHT
JASPER
smiles happily as the wind whips the hair around her face. DANIEL is driving
fast. He leans the Harley over as he takes a corner. The foot rest catches the
bitumen, sends up a flurry of sparks. JASPER laughs gleefully.
297 INT. DINING ROOM. NIGHT
HONEY
rushes into the room. HELEN is sprawled on the floor -photo albums spread on
the carpet in front of her. The fire is serious now. HONEY helps HELEN to her
feet, drags her towards the kitchen door. HELEN looks back at her photo albums.
HELEN
My
photos!
HELEN
pulls free of HONEY, rushes back to her photo albums.
298 EXT. CITY STREETS. NIGHT
CLOSE
on a footrest scraping the bitumen'; sending up an explosion of sparks.
CLOSE
on JASPER laughing as DANIEL leans into yet another curve, driving fast.
Up
ahead:
A
fire engine. The glow of a fire in the distance
DANIEL
overtakes the fire engine - siren blaring, red lights flashing. Concern shows
in is face.
299 EXT. DANIEL AND HELEN'S
HOUSE. NIGHT
DANIEL
and JASPER arrive a little ahead of the Fire Engine, get off the motor bike and
run towards the house. There is no sign on Helen or Honey. JASPER screams.
HELEN
and HONEY emerge from the front door - coughing and spluttering.
DANIEL
and JASPER rush forward, hug them both. DANIEL turns, sees the Fire Engine
pulling up, runs to greet the FIREMEN.
HELEN
and JASPER look back at the Fire Engine for a moment also and do not notice
that HONEY is staring at the fire -mesmerized.
As
FIREMEN spill from the Fire Engine HONEY starts to walk towards the front door
of the burning house - picking up pace as she goes. By the time HELEN and
JASPER turn back to the fire HONEY is almost at the front door.
HELEN
Honey!
No.
HELEN
runs after HONEY. DANIEL turns, sees HONEY running now to the front door. He
takes off after her.
DANIEL
Honey,
stop...
As
HONEY disappears in through the front door, HELEN can see that DANIEL intends
to follow her. She intercepts him, grabs hold of him.
HELEN
No.
DANIEL
struggles to free himself from HELEN. JASPER screams.
TWO
FIREMEN can see what is going on and rush to the front door. They take one look
at the flames and decide not to go inside.
DANIEL
breaks free of HELEN, arrives at the front door and tries to get past the
FIREMEN. They block his entrance.
FIREMAN
No,
mate…
JASPER
runs into HELEN'S arms. HELEN holds JASPER tight - both of them crying,
hysterical.
JASPER (voice over)
There
was nothing anyone could do. Honey had gone to meet her angels.
300 INT. CHURCH. DAY
JASPER
sits between DANIEL and HELEN in the church. The PRIEST waves the thurible over
the coffin.
JASPER (voice over)
At
least that's what we thought as we stood there, helpless…but God was in that
fire and he had his plans for Honey…
CLOSE
ON the coffin.
JASPER (voice over)
Just
like he did for Shadrach, Meshach and Abedigo.
The
shot of the coffin tilts down to reveal, resting up against it, Daniel's
portrait of Grant - his eyes blazing.
301 EXT. DANIEL AND HELEN'S
HOUSE. NIGHT
JASPER,
clinging tightly to HELEN, watches the house burn - all three in deep shock.
Suddenly JASPER screams:
JASPER
Honey!
Behind
an upstairs window, surrounded by fire, is HONEY.
301 INT. HALLWAY. DANIEL AND
HELEN’S HOUSE. NIGHT
HONEY,
clutching something wrapped in a blanket, runs from the window to the top of the
stairs. They are on fire. She is trapped.
302 EXT. DANIEL AND HELEN’S
HOUSE. NIGHT
HELEN
and JASPER are screaming; hysterical. DANIEL helps the FIREMEN get a ladder
from the side of the Fire Engine.
303 INT. HALLWAY. NIGHT
HONEY,
seemingly mesmerized, stares into the flames leaping up the stairway. She snaps
out of it, runs to a window -through which can be seen, in the distance,
DANIEL, JASPER and HELEN.
She
tries to open it. She can't. It is locked. The heat is getting to her. She is
surrounded by flames now. She looks around for some escape route. Her eyes fall
on the ornate antique chair.
304 EXT. DANIEL AND HELEN’S
HOUSE. NIGHT
HELEN
and JASPER watch in panic as DANIEL and the FIREMEN run towards the wall with a
ladder. The whole house is consumed with flames now.
The
upstairs window shatters. In slow motion the ornate antique chair flies through
the air. A moment later HONEY climbs onto the window sill, clutching something
wrapped in the blanket.
CLOSE
on HONEY, framed by fire. She looks back to the fire, looks down, closes her
eyes and jumps.
She
falls, in slow motion, into the arms of DANIEL and a FIREMAN - losing hold of
the blanket-wrapped object in her arms.
HELEN
and JASPER greet HONEY with hugs, kisses, tears.
They
watch the fire for a moment - all in various stages of shock. HONEY'S hair is
singed and she has some minor burns.
An
AMBULANCE OFFICER rushes up to attend to HONEY.
A
LITTLE LATER
HONEY
sits at the back of an ambulance as the AMBULANCE OFFICER dresses burns on her arm. HONEY looks at:
HELEN
and JASPER watching the fire as DANIEL talks to a FIREMAN nearby.
JASPER
turns, starts to walk back towards HONEY and the ambulance.
HONEY
takes out her mobile phone.
DANIEL
rejoins HELEN and for a moment they look at the fire.
HELEN
starts crying. DANIEL wraps his arms around her.
HELEN
looks back to where HONEY sits behind the ambulance, mobile phone to her ear.
HELEN
She
risked her life for my silly photos.
HELEN
smiles through her tears. DANIEL brushes them away. HELEN looks at the house on
fire - the FIREMEN now with hoses
playing on it.
HELEN
Haven't
got a secret stash of marshmellows, I suppose!
DANIEL
smiles, kisses HELEN lightly on the lips. They look at each - deep into each
others eyes.
With
flames leaping in the background DANIEL moves to kiss HELEN again - his eyes
wide open. They kiss - their eyes locked on each others.
HONEY,
mobile at her ear, waits nervously. In the background JASPER stops alongside
the object wrapped in a blanket.
HONEY
Mum…?
There
is no response.
HONEY
I'm
coming home, mum. A BEAT) I'm going to take care of you. (A BEAT) I love you.
There
is a long moment's silence.
HONEY'S MOTHER
Yes,
come home darling. It’s time for you to come home. Yes.(A BEAT) what's your
name these days?
HONEY(smiles)
Honey.
HONEY'S MOTHER
Honey.
JASPER
finishes unwrapping the blanket. We do not see what is inside it. She smiles,
shakes her head in amazement, looks back to the ambulance, sees HONEY talking
animatedly on her mobile - her face beaming with the happiest smile.
JASPER
looks down at Helen's battered violin case. She opens it and takes out Helen's
violin - newly strung.
THE END
Great screenplay, James, but I think you'd be better off shooting it with the Sony Xperia Z3 D6633 4G Dual Copper LTE. Better images than the Samsung. Good luck with it.
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